Thursday, February 18, 2010

Daughter so bad


 




Dear mom and dear dad
am sorry to be a daughter so bad
on the day of Valentine, I cry
as I see the pain I caused in your eye
The pain in your eyes is so intense
it brings back the memories with force immense
memories of how I made your head to bow
in shame because I never made you proud
again and again I kept hurting
and the mistakes I always kept making
Never did I realise how broken you would be
And nor do I think I can ever see
all that you have done for me, in health or being ill
in hopes that your dreamz I'll fulfill
But all the time your efforts went in vain
for every little thing I only caused the pain
I did try, atleast not to raise my voice
but this anger never left me any choice
shouts soon converted to tears
and my heart is occupied with fears
even after I tried not to fail you
maybe my trials weren't hard enough and never true
I don't think I can be the daughter you always wanted
And this feeling is what keeps me haunted.

10 comments:

Anunoy Samanta said...

Watta true confession... liked it buddy... cud b poetically more enriched but literally cudnt b bttr! kp writing.......................................

Neha said...

melu pyaaali shi bacchi >:D<

Unknown said...

# Anunoy
Am not relli a poet or anything..they just some words I have in mind that rhyme ..lol
but thankx a lot anyway :]

Blogger said...

Lovelyyyy poem ..I can relate myself with poem , and honestly guess you can understand how deeply it touched me ! Lovely written !

Unknown said...

Thankx :)
I appreciate

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An Unknown Writer said...

Hey Rashi, I loved your poem! I guess it reminds me my life too and if i ll confess, i ll do in the same way. I also write poems and raps and I must say that enrichment of words hardly matters, the way u express your feelings is most important and I have got touched by these lines.Truly amazing, u deserve a grand salute :)
Your blogs are interesting, i ll check all posts as soon as i ll get some time, filhaal need to logoff. Keep blogging

Unknown said...

# Ankit

thanx a lot ^__^
I appreciate you liked it ..
keep commenting .. xD

Sabiya Paul said...

this is lyk truly amazing!!! awsmmmieee!!! :* :D

Unknown said...

thanks ae :)
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