Am moving in circles without my will
again and again, the time stands still
the memories I try to leave behind
come back in loop and make me blind
in order to avoid people who may hurt my feel
the ones who love me suffer a great deal
I do try to make this right
atleast not to hurt the ones who hold me tight
in a warm embrace,
so lovely and full of grace
I tend to run behind things I can't possess
I know this already, but am so obessed
the grave penchant for hurting myself
I do things that make me lock my heart in a shelf.
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9 comments:
Again a simple beautiful , honest poem ..Hey , you may call your self a not-spo-good poet , but trust me , you write awsmmly !!!
I cud feel every word written in it
its very deep n straight 4rm ur heart dats wat makes it a beautiful poem.
Thanks a lot guyz :)
It's a pleasure ..
u know...dad also says that dont chase things...let things come to u...
cuz if u chase, u might never be able to acquire it...
so if it's meant to be, then it will definitely come to you...
how do u think im coping with things right now? form some great wisdoms :)
but isn't it like, until and unless we try, we won't obtain it ..?
I do feel sometimes and I have over-tried it .. but again, how do I know where the line is drawn ..?
Well u compose really very well.. And as far suggestion f d title is concerned i can suggest one, dunno it wud suit perfectly frm ur perspective or not..
But i thot f "A TUMULT WITHIN" can be apt title!!
God Bless
GudLuck in all ur Endeavours!
Mannku:)
I can consider it ..
but .. it's somehow not apt ..
i love it.... it was awesome again. u just made it more beautiful and lovely.!
^ thanks aye :)
keep reading
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